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is kahaanee ke premee ko kaalej ke din se hee pyaar rog lag raha tha tha l vo ek ladakee se pyaar karata hai l kabhee-kabhee paristhitiyon mein hone par ek vishesh premika na mil paane par kuchh log vidrohee ban kar aur ladakiyon se bhee pyaar ka svaang rachaane lagate hain aur un ka jeevan nasht kar deta hai l aisa hee is kahaanee ke naayak paritosh urph avaneendr ne kiya shuroo mein to tumhaaree pratishodh mein kuchh kanyaon se lekar l rahata hai jee bh kar uleecha l uleech-uleech tabaah kar raha hai kuchh samay baad paaya ki vah tumhaaree biraadar kanyaayen tabaah huee ho, ya na hua ho, main zaroor tabaah ho gaya el paritosh aur pashyantiyaan hee khud ko duniya mein ek doosare ke lie pyaar ke sadaabahaar manjar mein doobe rahane el paristhitiyon ke bahaav mein shaadee anyatr ho jaane par bhee ek doosare ko bhoolana nahin el rasik paritosh kee rag-rag mein pashyanti itanee samaee thee ki sapane mein bhee us ka naam munh se nik jaata tha l
yahaan tak ki un logon ne apane bachchon ko bhee ek doosare ka naam de daala el premee kee betee paseenti aur premika ka beta paritosh ho gaya el premika ne to apane bete ko apane premee ke deeladaul mein dhaalana chaaha aur kaaphee saphal bhee hua in ke laiph paartanar ke guzar jaane ke baad ke raaste saaph ho jaata hai ki ek doosare ka ata-pata na maaloom hone se apane svayan ke duniya mein rahate hue yaadon mein hee hilage rahate hain l par ka din kismat se vah apane bachchon kee prem kahaanee mein ulajh kar ajeeb paristhitiyon mein phir milate hain l par un bachchon ko nahin pata ki un ke maan-baap aapas mein kabhee premee rahe the l aur ittaphaak se ek din un ke maan-baap jab paark mein milate hain to premika inee motee ho jaata hai ki premee paritosh use pahachaan nahin paata el kit asalee prem mein motaapa se kuchh phark nahin padata el milate hue vahee premiyon vaale gile-shikave aaloo ho jaate hain l jaise yahaan pashyanti ka shikaayat bhara lahaja main thoonth deevaar ban kar bharabharaatee gaee el koee nahin aaya mujhe sambhaalane el tum bhee jaane kis duniya mein bhatak rahe the el vaise tum se main ne koee ummeed bhee na kee thee l
akelaapan jhelate hue aur umr ke is padaav mein jaisa hota hai pashyanti ka bhee aatmavishvaas majaboot hone kee vajaay bharabhara kar dhah raha tha ll that ne khud kee baaton mein kaha hai ki sankoch nahin kiya gaya hai sachcha pyaar hota hai koee aur se shaadee ho jaane par bhee ek doosare ko bhool nahin hai ye kahaanee us udaaharan hai l ab unake premee apane bachchon ke prem ke aage majaboor hain ki ek ek chaahata hai ki bachchon kee shaadee haan kintu doosara jeevan mein philm kism ka mod samajh kar un bachchon kee shaadee ko raajee nahin hona chaahatee el kit premika paritosh kee maan kee ichchha ka javaab khoya huye sambandhon aage badhana chaahata hai l jo dhaaga ab tak chhota tha use ab ek naya rishte mein baandh kar sanjona chaahatee hai l vos to jeevan saathee nahin banatee kintu ab aap mein pyaar karane vaale in donon bachchon ko vo dard na sahana pade jo se khud khud gujar el pashyanti ka kahana hai hamaare saath jo hua soya, ab in ke saath to vaisa kuchh na hone do pleej .....! is kahaanee mein paritosh kee patnee par taras aata hai ki khud pharj nibhaate hue ek din vah is duniya se hee chalee gaee el aur us ka pati paritosh pati bhagavaan ban kar bhee man se use nahin chaahate saka apane premika kee yaadon mein hee aajeevan dooba raha el ek aurat jo is insaan kee patnee hotee hai us ke baare mein jeevan kee bidambana kahaanee mein e ratyaksh roop se jaahir hotee hai l
dayaanand jee ne har prem kahaanee ko ek naya khaake mein dhaal kar prastut kiya hai el aap kee kahaaniyaan maitreyee ka pareshaan, phon par phlart aur ek jeeniyas kee vivaadaaspad maut mein kaaphee samaanata hai premikaen unake premee kee patnee aur bachchon ke prati hrday heen hain l in sabhee kahaaniyaan aap ne stree aur purush ke maanasik gathan par dhyaan dene ke lie likha hai l stree apanee sambandh mein majabootee chaahatee hai chaahen vo patnee ho ya premika, lekin purush kee pravrtti ek bhanvar kee tarah hai jo phool phool kee sundarata ke rasapaan ke baare mein sochata hai l padhate hue jigyaasu man kahaanee ke paatron mein ulajh jaata hai ki in prem sambandhon kee samasyaen paathak se aantarik prashn aur pahelee karane lagatee hain jaise ki: kya vaastav mein maitreyee kee premika kee naagendr jaise premee se shaadee ho sakatee hai? kya hukee samaaj is kee ijaajat devaraaga? maitreyee, bindu aur praarthanaen auraten jo bhaavanaatmak suraksha kee khoj mein hain kya unake premee log unhen aajeevan de sakenge?
is kahaanee ke premee ko kaalej ke din se hee pyaar rog lag raha tha tha l vo ek ladakee se pyaar karata hai l kabhee-kabhee paristhitiyon mein hone par ek vishesh premika na mil paane par kuchh log vidrohee ban kar aur ladakiyon se bhee pyaar ka svaang rachaane lagate hain aur un ka jeevan nasht kar deta hai l aisa hee is kahaanee ke naayak paritosh urph avaneendr ne kiya shuroo mein to tumhaaree pratishodh mein kuchh kanyaon se lekar l rahata hai jee bh kar uleecha l uleech-uleech tabaah kar raha hai kuchh samay baad paaya ki vah tumhaaree biraadar kanyaayen tabaah huee ho, ya na hua ho, main zaroor tabaah ho gaya el paritosh aur pashyantiyaan hee khud ko duniya mein ek doosare ke lie pyaar ke sadaabahaar manjar mein doobe rahane el paristhitiyon ke bahaav mein shaadee anyatr ho jaane par bhee ek doosare ko bhoolana nahin el rasik paritosh kee rag-rag mein pashyanti itanee samaee thee ki sapane mein bhee us ka naam munh se nik jaata tha l
yahaan tak ki un logon ne apane bachchon ko bhee ek doosare ka naam de daala el premee kee betee paseenti aur premika ka beta paritosh ho gaya el premika ne to apane bete ko apane premee ke deeladaul mein dhaalana chaaha aur kaaphee saphal bhee hua in ke laiph paartanar ke guzar jaane ke baad ke raaste saaph ho jaata hai ki ek doosare ka ata-pata na maaloom hone se apane svayan ke duniya mein rahate hue yaadon mein hee hilage rahate hain l par ka din kismat se vah apane bachchon kee prem kahaanee mein ulajh kar ajeeb paristhitiyon mein phir milate hain l par un bachchon ko nahin pata ki un ke maan-baap aapas mein kabhee premee rahe the l aur ittaphaak se ek din un ke maan-baap jab paark mein milate hain to premika inee motee ho jaata hai ki premee paritosh use pahachaan nahin paata el kit asalee prem mein motaapa se kuchh phark nahin padata el milate hue vahee premiyon vaale gile-shikave aaloo ho jaate hain l jaise yahaan pashyanti ka shikaayat bhara lahaja main thoonth deevaar ban kar bharabharaatee gaee el koee nahin aaya mujhe sambhaalane el tum bhee jaane kis duniya mein bhatak rahe the el vaise tum se main ne koee ummeed bhee na kee thee l
akelaapan jhelate hue aur umr ke is padaav mein jaisa hota hai pashyanti ka bhee aatmavishvaas majaboot hone kee vajaay bharabhara kar dhah raha tha ll that ne khud kee baaton mein kaha hai ki sankoch nahin kiya gaya hai sachcha pyaar hota hai koee aur se shaadee ho jaane par bhee ek doosare ko bhool nahin hai ye kahaanee us udaaharan hai l ab unake premee apane bachchon ke prem ke aage majaboor hain ki ek ek chaahata hai ki bachchon kee shaadee haan kintu doosara jeevan mein philm kism ka mod samajh kar un bachchon kee shaadee ko raajee nahin hona chaahatee el kit premika paritosh kee maan kee ichchha ka javaab khoya huye sambandhon aage badhana chaahata hai l jo dhaaga ab tak chhota tha use ab ek naya rishte mein baandh kar sanjona chaahatee hai l vos to jeevan saathee nahin banatee kintu ab aap mein pyaar karane vaale in donon bachchon ko vo dard na sahana pade jo se khud khud gujar el pashyanti ka kahana hai hamaare saath jo hua soya, ab in ke saath to vaisa kuchh na hone do pleej .....! is kahaanee mein paritosh kee patnee par taras aata hai ki khud pharj nibhaate hue ek din vah is duniya se hee chalee gaee el aur us ka pati paritosh pati bhagavaan ban kar bhee man se use nahin chaahate saka apane premika kee yaadon mein hee aajeevan dooba raha el ek aurat jo is insaan kee patnee hotee hai us ke baare mein jeevan kee bidambana kahaanee mein e ratyaksh roop se jaahir hotee hai l
dayaanand jee ne har prem kahaanee ko ek naya khaake mein dhaal kar prastut kiya hai el aap kee kahaaniyaan maitreyee ka pareshaan, phon par phlart aur ek jeeniyas kee vivaadaaspad maut mein kaaphee samaanata hai premikaen unake premee kee patnee aur bachchon ke prati hrday heen hain l in sabhee kahaaniyaan aap ne stree aur purush ke maanasik gathan par dhyaan dene ke lie likha hai l stree apanee sambandh mein majabootee chaahatee hai chaahen vo patnee ho ya premika, lekin purush kee pravrtti ek bhanvar kee tarah hai jo phool phool kee sundarata ke rasapaan ke baare mein sochata hai l padhate hue jigyaasu man kahaanee ke paatron mein ulajh jaata hai ki in prem sambandhon kee samasyaen paathak se aantarik prashn aur pahelee karane lagatee hain jaise ki: kya vaastav mein maitreyee kee premika kee naagendr jaise premee se shaadee ho sakatee hai? kya hukee samaaj is kee ijaajat devaraaga? maitreyee, bindu aur praarthanaen auraten jo bhaavanaatmak suraksha kee khoj mein hain kya unake premee log unhen aajeevan de sakenge?
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